baku:
‘comedy has to be offensive to be funny’
in 1999 homer j simpson wanted to be more respected so he changed his name to ‘max power’ after seeing it as a setting on a hairdryer. he went on to become almost-famous. 18 years later, just seeing the words ‘max power’ on my own hairdyer makes me laugh
maybe you just need to write better jokes rather than resorting to shock humour